by Robotman1974
I think Pam should never have killed Brad she should have just knocked the wind out of him then pam should have taken Brad to Marcias then had his memory erased from the time he and Pam met so he wouldnt have any memory of finding out she was a fembot Robotman why dont you make a change to that it would be better than killing Brad off.why dont you have Pam kill off collin instead he is the P.I.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
I was kind of expecting there might be a dark twist especially after what happened with the dog, but that was pretty bold. That said, it was still very well written and the fact that it was done so coldly really enhanced the feel that she was still a machine. (I still wouldn't mind having one of my own, though!)
I was expecting brad to turn out to be a bot from a rival company.
Uggh. A terrible ending for Brad. Sigh 23 chapters down the drain. Dark, twisted rug pull.