by JANAMARIE
Such a great read,with a easy stotyline ,flowing well.So nice to read this type of story once in awhile,shows how it is out there for people(lovin n carin n sharin)
another chapter please you had me in tears i hope to see more of you and more chapters of John and Marlo
Pat M.
USA
This is such a great story!! Not only is the sex great, but the love and feelings in it are great also!! There are some lessons in there for a lot of people in today's world! Thank you so much for writing this, It is really a work of art!!
What a terrific change of pace from the normal slam bam thank you ma'am sex stories we read on Literotica. The criticism that it is racist is just so much garbage.
The observations of Marlo's looks by Sara and Bob are fair and we would have to assume accurate. Their honest opinions of her looks and behavior are what makes the whole story tick.
JANMARMD pleae keep writing more of this tpe of material
In all of your first time stories you have placed the hymen deep in the vigina, if you are a woman you would know that the hymen is at the very front of the vigina.
I would say that this was one of the best stories I have ever read I am white and we had a black girl that
was like a daughter to us she was killed in an automobile
accident down in Florida