All Comments on 'Something Unexpected Ch. 02'

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FranziskaSissy 9 months ago

Oh my, what a jerk this ex, sending a friend to kick her ass, god this male ego must be smashed ….. back to the sapphic love and the girls, this was fun to read …. What i don’t agree with is alcohol and the excesses coming with ….. alcohol is a devilish drug and i see this scenario happen in the club as borderline act, because if a man would have done such it would be rape

Still five stars ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🍀

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

A Good Start and Well Written!

Hallo PP,

This is turning into a very interesting story,,, can't wait to read chapter 3..

Thank-you,

Gay Kat.

Anonymousabout 10 years ago

Hello PoeticallyPersonified. Yes, chapter 02 is much better..

Maybe there's more to this story than just a very sexy writer?

Lesbian, Sundari.

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

damn, can't wait to see how the story continues!

falllove69 almost 12 years ago

dont stop writing

i cant wait to read more good so far

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

good start - keep up the good work

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