All Comments on 'Son Strips at Friends Bridal Shower'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Awesome is the only word

Well written, and HOT! HOT! HOT!

peterm_wapeterm_waalmost 18 years ago
WOW...GREAT Story!

VERY Exciting...LOVED the story and the details. Cant wait to read more....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oh My God!!! This Story is SO HOT!!!!!

Holy shit! Naughty Mom had me hard the whole time. Super Sexy Story. Nice build-up. This is One HOT! HOT! Story. HOT! HOT! HOT!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
So visual!

These two pages say more than some ten page stories do!

What girl wouldn't you want to do there? Mom, the bride, the best friends!

They all sound incredibly hot!!

FreshlyDirtyFreshlyDirtyalmost 18 years ago
GREAT Mom/Son Setup

That was an excellent set-up for mom/son encounter. So many stories have a poor set-up for the mom and son getting together. This one is at least somewhat believable AND hot! Only thing that could've made me jack it harder to this story would have been if the mom and son weren't apart for so many years, you know, if they had been in contact and closer rather than not knowing each other from being seperated. STILL, this story is blazing hot and that's only a small nit pick. GREAT JOB, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent and Hot!!!!

I had thought of this for an interracial story and only mildly considered it for incest. You did a magnificent job!!! Great mother/son/threesome story!! Awesome!!!!

--Hernest Hemingsex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW

One of the best so hot .... hoping thier is a part 2

Maximo1Maximo1almost 18 years ago
Great Story

I only have one comment ..the sentense below is pretty funny. I think I would have rewritten it.

"I instinctively licked my son's cum from my lip. I don't know what came over me,..."

Well duh ...(I am still chuckling.)

Am looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
INCREDIBLE!

Wow...WOW!

zombie22zombie22about 17 years ago
Great Stuff

Very Good and short and to the point! Can't wait for the next chapter!

scribbleskillzscribbleskillzover 16 years ago
Damn...

That was one of the best stories i have read here in a while! High score well deserved! A sequel isn't needed, but i hope you do continue to write. thank you

strife75strife75over 15 years ago
Wow another Massive penis

Say it ain't so.

God i think about 40% of the words were used to describe his massive penis.

Could have been a good story if he had just been a regular guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absolutely fantastic

This story has fantastic tension, with the extreme sexual appeal of the characters working up an almost believable frenzy, with even hotter implications. Most explicitly CFNM writers I read don't do half as good a job as you do here, to make the audience feel both the immense magnetism of the son, and the mounting arousal of the women at the party (the mother in particular). Truly stunning, one of my all-time favourites!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Great story. I would have loved to be in David's place

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Excellent and hotter than magma!! I think any two adults that want to fuck should fuck. Related or not. if it is a two way consent, then go for it. How can it be wrong at that point. It's the most pleasurable thing available to the mind of man. Sex with Mom!!!

TabooroticaTabooroticaover 11 years ago
Yes!

Thanks for the story. Nicely written and very hot. I love reading the stories from a woman's perspective. Seems to make them more taboo. Very nice. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sequel?

will you write a sequel to this?

swoondoggledswoondoggledalmost 10 years ago
Hot well written story

Really enjoyable romp with a good mix of action, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
FROM THE TEXT

Lady's Nights (Ladies)

new that they were pretty tame (knew)

bride's maids (bridesmaids)

half drunk (half-drunk)

far away (faraway)

it's release (its)

felt it ans moaned (and)

I was doing thing I would not normally do (things)

half mast (half-mast)

let out a, "Oohhh (an)

earth shaking (earthshaking )

get away (getaway)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Happy Mom

My son turned 21 and we had a party and he had some friends there. About midnight some of them left but six boys still there. Feeling good and joking around they were watching X-ray movie Some remark was made about a set of tits on movie and I said my were that big. The boys turned around and said show us. My top came off and tits showing. Soon hands over them and they sucked them.That night started him and his friends having sex with me and it still going on years later. Most of them has moved away but some still joke about that night.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
That is incredible!

Was this a true event, or an extremely well written fantasy? Either way it was seriously amazing. I'd love to hear more.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 5 years ago
nice

chapter 2 please

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Damn

That was hot. I need to know what's next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More Incest

Mom and son have to talk with each other in part 2, and admit their love and attraction for each other. Then make incestuous love all night.

DaikkennDaikkennover 2 years ago

This needs to keep going

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I looked at a picture of my sons dick in disbelief at my daughter in laws to be hen party,neve decided that she didn't want to go to a club so we had a girls night at her house,we started playing naughty games and we soon got onto men's dicks,what's the biggest one we'd had was the question,we all gave pretty normal answers until neve talked about her husband to be cock (my son) no way the girls said not believing that John my son had a 9 inch dick,I've got a photo to prove it neve said look! She passed her phone around with a photo of my sons cock on the screen! Wow most of the girls said with even neve's mother Barbara taken aback! Jesus Elaine she said what have you been feeding him? I held the phone and looked at John's cock! It was so thick aswell,neve was to drunk to notice id sent the picture to my phone and the night went on,in the 4 days leading up to the wedding John stayed at my house,I couldn't stop looking at the picture of his cock and deliberately left my phone in the bathroom with the picture on the screen,John came downstairs handing me my phone,you left it in the bathroom mum,little bit strange this mum but why is there a photo of my dick on your phone? I pretended to be embarrassed and said that he wasn't supposed to see it, I told him that neve had sent it to me when she was drunk,but why have you kept it John said? I can't answer you love I said! It's not a normal one though is it I replied hoping I could see it for myself,neve is a lucky girl, excuse me for a minute I need to go to the toilet,I could feel my pussy getting wet and didn't put my knickers back on,John was sat at my kitchen table and I asked him if he wanted something to eat,yes please mum,I went to the freezer bending down more on purpose,I knew my pussy was on view and looked under my arm to see John staring at me! I made him something quick and took it over to him dropping the fork on the floor,I'll get it I said,I give him a sight of my pussy again and put my hand on his thigh as I got up! I noticed the bulge in his jeans and said oops someone's a bit sensitive! He apologised adjusting his jeans,I walked to my sink and said it must be this bending over again! Christ mum stop it,I lifted my skirt facing him and gave him a glimpse of my hairy pussy! Well is it this John? I'm getting married on Saturday mum! I grabbed my phone and said are you like that now? This is unbelievable he said as he finally undid the button of his jeans,it seems bigger in real I said to my son,I took my top off and didn't have a bra on,I played with my tits with one hand and rubbed my pussy with the other,John got into my way of thinking and stroked his cock,thats a big cock hun I told my son,looks like your pussy is wet mum! I licked my fingers as John came closer,his cock touched my thigh and I shuddered with pleasure,you are wet he said playing with my pussy, he lifted me onto the worktop and his cock entered me! It felt incredible as he fucked me,we fucked each other for the next 3 days before he and neve got married

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it but where's the rest of it??????????? 5stars

Angus74Angus74about 2 months ago

This needs a sequel

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