All Comments on 'Sonder'

Good writing, La Ronde for the 21st century perhaps

Well told. I wonder how many times a day people's interaction come full circle like that.

Very broken up. Mmmm. Wrong way of saying it.

So many segments. Glimpses of people daily grinds. You, however, wrote them out with a simple flowing connection. Nicely done. Crisp.

But will this stand as a story alone? Or will you write more of each segment in other stories.

Your circle was well done. Applaud!!

Well done!

Nice story

A totally new type of story I stumbled across after so many days. The concept is mind-blowing!!! What makes it more special to me is that I too had been thinking about the same thing for many days...hats off to you...you make it come alive so deftly..

I love this structure. The concept is so beautiful and well done. I like that you consistently manage to make us care about each person while so easily moving onto the next. And somehow, in such a limited amount of time, you turn our expectations on their heads in every vignette. And the sex scenes are erotic. I'm actually amazed at how much you got in and how well you did it. I gotta go back and read it again.

Beautifully, artfully done. A complex love story, told in many short bursts. Loved it. 5 stars.

I love this story, which is a series of short stories within a short story. Very creative. It is the best of Literotica. 5 stars.

Tales written by different life experiences and its just truth …. Frighteningly shameful brutally hurtful and a small light on the horizon .... Doing and acting humanly

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