All Comments on 'Son's Ex-Wife'

by chuckp7860

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What I think?

IS that this was badly done. Just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please get a editor

starred at her breasts really? An editor will assist you in making your story easier to read instead of moving from one glaring error to the next.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 10 years ago
Hey Chuck, how far did you get in school?

This story is so ganked with errors, typos, shitty grammar, etc., I'm guessing you didn't get very far in your education. At a minimum, I don't believe you paid much attention during your English class. Am I right?

Regardless of how poor you skills are when it comes to grammar and spelling, this story was already doomed: It's simply not very good, and even the best spell-check and editor couldn't have helped it.

chytownchytownalmost 10 years ago
Thanks***

For sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Lordy Lordy someone just stunk up this joint with a steaming shit pile

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I thouhht it was great!

Got my juices flowing =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mr Lucky

That to me was a lovely story and made all my fantasies come true it was explained well in graphic detail THANK YOU

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