by chuckp7860
starred at her breasts really? An editor will assist you in making your story easier to read instead of moving from one glaring error to the next.
This story is so ganked with errors, typos, shitty grammar, etc., I'm guessing you didn't get very far in your education. At a minimum, I don't believe you paid much attention during your English class. Am I right?
Regardless of how poor you skills are when it comes to grammar and spelling, this story was already doomed: It's simply not very good, and even the best spell-check and editor couldn't have helped it.
That to me was a lovely story and made all my fantasies come true it was explained well in graphic detail THANK YOU