All Comments on 'Son's Nasty Girlfriend'

by mtnman2003

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Um?

7 1/2 inch circumference dick??? Lol c'mon now.. At least be a little realistic here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
reads like short-of-breath

dude this story could have made the list, but i have to agree with the previous comment-very weird way to tell a story. do you write manuals for a living? it reads like one. reminds me of someone who is telling a story while running a marathon! could have been a cool read....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Writing style is awful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
read like a drivers ed manual

turn right-no left-watch for the pot hole-go fast-slower---dude---like a drivers ed course

bornagainbornagainabout 17 years ago
The best Office sex

I hope you have more office sex with Vicki and the girl friend.

Atlanta,Ga

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Very HOT!

Need the next chapter(s). Maybe you can make a baby with her with your son thinking he is the baby's daddy, just so you can keep all this in the family so to speak, for future chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
loved it!

I really enjoyed your story... Can't wait for the continuation. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good

good

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