All Comments on 'Son's Rise Ch. 04'

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theMagetheMageabout 14 years ago
I really enjoyed the story prior to this chapter.

Mother love took a major left turn. Perhaps you should confine yourself to writing in the BDSM genre...

nippelfansmall2nippelfansmall2about 14 years ago
bad, really BAD !!!

1/5 :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Paled in comparison

This chapter paled in comparison to the last three chapters. It was loving and fun with respect. This chapter was just mean. The mom didn't respect her son and Derrick didn't respect his lover. In my head the series ended after the third story.

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