All Comments on 'Sophia and Joshua'

I had me wanting more. Very erotic! Would love to see Chapter 2. You describe things so well. I found myself putting myself in Joshua's place.

Sophia had a very nice situation for her, but choice and consequences have to enter this at sometime. I like to see her lose both, myself.

This was a good story, but written so poorly that I almost clicked off before I got into it. So many mistakes in the verbiage that I would have to go back and reread so that it made sense.