All Comments on 'Sophie'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
Thank you.

A sweet and tightly-written tale.

DanielOrmeDanielOrmealmost 14 years ago
Adding you to my Favorite Authors

After "The Cleaning Lady," "A Strange Day," and this story, I've added you to my Favorite Authors list. Keep up the great work!

brian473317brian473317almost 14 years agoAuthor
Thank You All

I appreciate every single one of your comments. Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
For a shy lady, she sure jumps into sex quickly

What's the rush? Would have been better with a slower pace, with some reluctance that had to be overcome; and the step-by-step way it was overcome.

jonnar01jonnar01over 13 years ago
great, erotic story

Very well wriiten, concise story. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wow

fantastic story looking at Asians I will remember they love cock too and are are horny!!!

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...