by toocold
Is it jus me or is the thought of a girl shitting her pants the biggest turn off ever? That line completely Spoiled
The story...
Hay this is great. I loved the way you slowly built the sexual suspense. Please give us more as a prologue it gave us a great introduction to a hell of a lot more
The writing looks technically good, but more play action, with less history, would be more arousing. Thanks for your story! I'm anxious to see where it goes!
I love the prologue and I can't wait to hear more of these three stepsisters together