All Comments on 'Sorrento'

The author has made the erotic sex secondary to the stories real message. All of the interesting facts about the brother and sister plus learning of their trip, made me as a reader feel as the people were real. The erotic sex was just an extra thrill to give the story an all around good feel. Thanks for the post, and hope to read more of the couple....Rich

I agree with the prior comment about the development of the characters as real people, although I'm not sure there's a "message." The pleasure of sibling incest stories is the seduction and anticipation leading up to the breaking of the taboo. Nicely written. I'll definitely look for more.

I really enjoyed this piece. The style in this story bears a brevity I strive for in my own work, but more than anything, <i>Sorrento</i> got me going.<br><br>There was a decent introduction of the characters in the beginning, and I definitely enjoyed the perspective of the older sister. One minor gripe I had was that, while she did mention her reasoning for wanting to make her brother forget about his girlfriend, there weren't any other reasons for her wanting to seduce him beyond that.<br><br>The sister's direct approach seemed to work, and the sex was written very well and very vividly, if not a little quickly. However, once I finished 'enjoying' the story, I came back to write my review when I realized I didn't know much of the sister's motivation. Granted, it seems like there still is a bit more story to be covered, so perhaps we'll see what develops. I'm also interested to know if Jen's desires for her brother are more deep-seeded than simple girl-jealousy.<br><br>Other than that, I haven't got much else to say. It was well-written and to the point, and for such a short submission, it seemed that quite a bit happened. I've never been to the part of Italy you tenderly alluded to in the middle of the story (and this is a digression), but you succeeded in reminding me that it's been far too long since I've been traveling.<br><br>Overall, nice work. The story could definitely use a bit more meat on its bones, but it's hard for me to complain too much when I enjoyed it as much as I did. Out of curiosity, I checked your profile. After picking up my jaw off the floor after seeing the pictured contained therein, I saw in your information that this story is about you and your brother? I picked up my jaw off the floor a second time and realized that, true or not, the notion that this story <i>might've</i> been real added to my enjoyment, strangely enough.<br><br>Needless to say, I'll be reading your other stories. Keep up the great work, and I hope to see more from you soon.<br><br>--Jackson

Wonderful! Very sensuous and erotic! I loved it! Will there be more?

Wonderful! Very sensuous and erotic! I loved it! Will there be more?

Rich said it better than I can. It was really fine story. I hope there will be more of this one. Thanks for your work.

I enjoyed reading this and Florence. It's fun and sexy to read your stories. It's arousing, partly because I can picture the surroundings, the beauty, the weather, the closeness between you two.

Thanks!

-Carl

That was incredable. I loved it. I was so hard after reading it.

You write a beautiful tail about incest...reading your incestual tail of sensual love is as exciting ans your tail...this old guy gets jealous of Matt have such a voluptuous sister (the photo in your bio is you right?) Assuming you are a gifted writer who also writes for a living, this old Italian who has an incestuous relation with a daughter and neice, will enjoy and occasionally look at that bio pix

Scorpio scorperi@aol.com

continue making me happy

As long as I avoid too much pasta and cheese, my weight is manageable. At about five feet seven inches and one hundred nineteen pounds, I do OK.

@@@ ok? Lol, im 5'7" and due to health had at one time.dropped to 120. You could see all my ribs, so add tits to that and the body would be even skinnier!! @@@

The first day we were both cautious about changing clothes in the bathroom and going to bed almost fully dressed. But after the beach incident, I decided it was time to make my little brother forget about his dear Amy...at least for two weeks. I resorted to wearing my bikini in the room, or taking off my more formal dinner clothes where he could see, or walking out after a shower in just panties.

@@@ almost fully dressed?! Wtf? You've lived together all your lives! Surely he walked around in boxers and you in panties and a shirt, braless, all the time! Should be comfortable around each other! @@@

I watched him get into position. I felt his cock at the entrance to my cunt. A couple seconds later, as I looked up at the green leaves of the trees and the clear blue sky, my brother started to fuck me.

@@@ go brother, go!! Hehe ;) glad theres none of that 'but your my sister' crap! @@@

"You really need another shower," Matt said while looking down at me.

@@@ lol, any other guy would have prolly told her she looked fucking hot! Laying there on the floor naked, slick with sweat, hair splayed out and covered in my cum! Hot! @@@

Written brother/sister story Bella ;)

Family love is far more special and erotic than anything on this world,to hell with all other girls,none can compare to the love of an older sister,I'm so jealous of him....Please continue with these two

did everything she wanted him to do. A simp.

Did she fulfill her goal? Did she take him away from Amy? What happened after they got back home? It's not finished!