All Comments on 'Sorry for the Intrusion, Ma'am'

by C.C. Rider

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fab!!

This was absolutly fabulous! Finally a unique idea.

KatLadyKatLadyalmost 20 years ago
Oh yeah!

Now that's a nooner!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Awesome

This is one of the best stories I have read on here. Keep up the good work mate.

StubbyoneStubbyone6 months ago

Very well done. Typically this is a scenario played out at an imagined doctor’s office. I like the clever twist on the airport TSA theme. Role play can be alot of fun if both are into it and stay in character. There are so many fantasy situations that can be played out from old boyfriends, former professors, co workers, waitresses or waiters. The list is endless. It would be fun if the tables were turned and she was the one in charge and he had to comply. Your descriptions of the various “tests” were playful and well done. I wish you were still writing because I’m running out of your stories and honestly your stories are among the very best I’ve ever read. Whether you continue writing or not, I wish you well and thank you profusely for sharing what’s in your most fertile brain. You are an exceptional man. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s for you and your writing. ❤️

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