All Comments on 'Soul "Mate"'

It was a good effort. It's your first submission so won't cut down the rating for the mistakes. There were lots of mistakes like for eg:- Tamara became Sara & Daniel became David. Few spelling mistakes where also there. Take help from an editor. A little polish & your story will get even better. Anyways, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the story.

Nothing hotter than a son fucking his mommy.............NOTHING....

The story is very exciting and the thought of the son impregnating his mother makes it even more exciting to read. The author has developed many different ways the story ended with a cheating father being murdered. The court records being destroyed, and the money that was left to them by the spouse/dad was a little unrealistic, but didn't distract from the sweet sex and love portrayed on the story between mom and son. Just the sweet, sloppy wet,hard banging fucking between mom and son was enough to sell the story to me. The author just needs to clean-up the stories just a little to help the reading flow . Thanks for your adventurous sexy hot story....Rich

Loved the story.It was hot and spicey.Only one thing, you should have checked your spelling. I uaually don't give a damn about such things but your story just had to many errors. Keep writing though, your telling of a story has a lot of promise.

ONE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC HOT STORY. SOUL MATE.

CAN'T WAIT TO READ EVEN MORE OF THIS AUTHOR'S EXCITING

STORIES GREAT.

This is a fine story of hot motherfucking. I really like it. Personally, I prefer to think of the boy is DJ, as in "'I think she's passed out. She had a really good work out earlier.' DJ said grinning." That's him talking about the workout he gave his mother's mommy-hole with his big fat cock. His father's a washout, but he certainly isn't. DJ is big, tall, strong, and well-muscled, a really good-looking guy. Like plenty of sons, he's got a deep interest in that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that he came out of. He knows what belongs in there--what he's got big and stiff sticking out from between his own legs. From the first, his mom has an inkling that she's being taken by someone who has the right to take her. Gradually, it dawns on her that it's her own 21 year old son. She knows and her boy knows that that cunt was made for that cock. The story is very enjoyable, five stars of course, and occasionally unconsciously funny. When dad dies, they learn they've inherited his fortune of $500 billion, a pretty hefty sum. I'm glad that DJ and his mother stayed together for life, and that he fucked babies up the same twat where he was once a baby. That big, smart, brazen lad sure had the balls to do it.

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It could have been a descent story if not for all the missing words and wrong words in it take your time and triple check your work on your next story

Knew for a start, otherwise good story.

lots of mistakes, but good. 500 Billion TOO FUNNY about 20 times more than Gates!

LOTS of silly little mistakes, but sweetheart you write very well and your stories are HAWT!!!

'The beast' and refering to each other as 'mate' doesn't really add to the story, just makes it seem weird. A lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, and Tamara can't be 34 if she is DJ's biological mother.

good story 4 stars idiot...

The story is not bad. The spelling is horrendous! And the 500 billion,really! Work on the aforementioned and you'll do fine.

the only real mistake was the age thing. All you need to do is make her age 37 & her 16 when she got pregnant originally. Then it should make more sense

Primal sex married with incestuous romance. With some more care to correct typos, this would be even better a story. Thanks.

Good story , I like it. AAAA++++

Damn this was a good story. I hope that u write more chapters to this so we can find out what happened with the kids and the rest of the family

If someone worth 500b dollars is murdered they will investigate and find out who did it

Good concept for a story. Need grammar check or an editor for sure. And as others have stated, the age difference was off and the 500 billion was way too much. 5 million would have worked.

Have you ever heard of a editor and you took a story that had a good concept and screwed and 500 billion dollars not even the richest man in the world has that much money that was way too much