All Comments on 'Soul's Divide Ch. 02-04'

This is the same sure hand that penned (keyed?) The Shadow Dagger. Characters drawn with the same deft economy. Promise of the same sort of complex plot, rife with folds and twists.

I hope that there will be a Jon kind of character. I especially enjoyed following the exploits of one so adroit and dark. Roberts, perhaps?

I know that wherever you take us will be fascinating.

Welcome back!

I agree with GimletEdge, this may end up turning into another epic. I certainly hope it does!

I can also see Pearson as an Ashford type, so far out of his league that he's just along for the ride.

completely absorbing.

more please ;0)

The suspense is going to get me on this one!

Thank you for sharing your gift again.

with you about this being an epic fail. I understand that you may be struggling with an unfamiliar genre, but your writing is superb as always. I'm fascinated by your characters already. I can imagine several paths the plot could take that would make for compelling reading. I'd love to see you write more of this story, but if you decide to recycle it pass it off and I'll try my hand. Of course, I can't hope to be as masterful as you.

I too, disagree with this being a fail. I though the story was just starting to get really interesting! Please don't stop, because I'm sure readership will increase as you write more!

Things are definitely getting interesting. Please keep writing!

I am amazed with your writing talent. I am in anticipation for the next chapters to be written. Please finish this story.

Hey man you got to get that thought about this story being an epic fail. Its absolutely fantastic! you can see the comments of the people below... According to me you are one of the most talented writers here on literotica. I really hope you would continue this story because it just seemed to become interesting and exciting....

sorry i meant to say you got to get the thought "out" about this story being an epic fail...:)

I have to agree with everyone else... I think it's really good and I hope you decide to finish it.

Your characters are just coming to life and becoming multi-dimensional, don't stop now. I really like both the characters and the story line and hope you come back to complete it. Strong work.

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