All Comments on 'Southern Dreams Ch. 1'

I thought this was really well written and I enjoyed the plotline. Great job.

hi, I am really enjoying this! The writing is very evocative. There are only a few technical things that I would change- i.e. sometimes I don't know what time period we're in, you say she's born in 1847 but is 17 in 1862, sometimes I'm confused who is speaking. But very sweet, and very mysterious, I want to know what happened to her mother and how they end up together!

The maths bother so much it spoils a very nice story!!!

First class writing

Thank you