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Robert looks at her, her eyes filled with tears, her cheeks flushed from her earlier passion. He thinks that this was a foolhardy undertaking. He, a Captain in the Union Army, smitten by this woman-child, yet he cannot help but feel something he has not felt for such a long time. " I will return my to you, that is my solemn promise. I will return and we shall be together."
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AnnaValley11over 5 years agoFirst class writing
Thank you
Anonymousalmost 13 years agohi, I am really enjoying this! The writing is very evocative. There are only a few technical things that I would change- i.e. sometimes I don't know what time period we're in, you say she's born in 1847 but is 17 in 1862, sometimes I'm confused who is speaking. But very sweet, and very mysterious, I want to know what happened to her mother and how they end up together!
JoiseyMadisonabout 17 years agoI thought this was really well written and I enjoyed the plotline. Great job.
