by RejectReality
Author needs to do a better job of proof reading. There terms "come" and "cum" are different.
Delicious tale of a young man learning what can come of an older woman's sexual experience. I don't know what the last commenter was talking about, unless he thinks "cum" is a verb.
That story was hot! I agree that a continuation of the story in Chicago would be great! (Maybe she ends up carrying his baby?)
Anonymous/Confusion needs to be a lot less snarky & do more proof reading of his/her own. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed the story, a quick sexy romp which, as your name suggests, rejects reality and imposes its own. So, why did you have to impose the "morning after" reality? You could have just as easily given Kevin VD, so why pick "potential pregnancy?" I enjoyed the story, but this element of "actual reality" turned the story in a direction it didn't need to go.
Well, to be perfectly honest, I thought it was hot LOL There was just something about her momentarily panicking and then surrendering to enjoy the moment that lit my fire. It wasn't meant to hint at possible pregnancy, and that's why I brought up the morning after pill to eliminate what would be a complication for future fun. Glad you enjoyed the story, and sorry that point pulled you out of the fantasy. Thanks to everyone else who's commented as well, if I haven't replied directly or couldn't because you're anonymous.
You should continue this... maybe she is one of his college teachers????
Brilliant writing. You are a fantastic writer. I don't think there was too much oral. She should have introduced him to the fine art of having him sniff, lick, suck and tongue fuck her tangy asshole until she came again. You get 5 stars for your superior writing.
It should be an interesting start to his college years.
I love it when complaints about grammar and spelling and have errors. The proof readers need proof readers.
lol
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was fun and although I'm sure there isn't a planned sequel it really would be great if there was and it turned out she was one of his professors and they picked up where they started. Thanks again for the fun read.
Second RR story I’ve read. Impressive short yarns, strong female characters and my only complaint is that the stories aren’t long enough.
Excellent!
I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to reading more of your work.
A combination of the best thing on earth at the happiest place on earth, such a great ride!