by TxRad
The details are great. What are the directions to the pond from Baytown ?
Loved how this developed. Love at first sight,truly romantic not to mention the sex was hot.Both chapters.excellent writing.Off to read more of your stories now
especially the rutting and rooting. TK U MLJ LV NV
I accidentally hit the one star and didn't comment. My selection should have been a four star grade. I truly love your stories but I think that you need an editor to check your editor.
this story could use another chapter to tie up the loose ends.
Tex, ya did it again. Excellent story about a budding romance. Wish you'd finish the next 40 miles, and their future together. Oh, and throw in some humiliation for her Ex too. Thank you for this one!
I want more but what you gave us was plenty, it was just so good I selfishly want more.
I just so want to do some editing on grammar and spelling to make it a more perfect read without the jarring improperly used and misspelled words.
If you ever decide to write a sequel, I'd love to do some editing for you. Not content, as that is perfect, just grammar. Still, 5 stars.
Please continue the series, it's wonderful. 10 stars! Not legally, but they are a married couple. Carmen needs to feel the joy of motherhood a few times, then grandma. She needs to share it with her loving husband. Mommy and daddy are nearly sacred words...