All Comments on 'Sow's Ear'

That's it. Keep up the good work.

I haven't read such a good story in a long time.

It's well written, and your English is improving by far.

Thank you so much for this extremely HOT and passionate story, Tx.

I love the humor too! ;

Keep up the good work!

A few word use problems but I loved the story line. It ended way too soon. Hope you are planning a sequel where they marry and move to his house on the lake. In any event, well done over all.

I wonder what the ex-husband was thinking about both when he gave away the ticket and when he invited her to go to New York with him!

I agree with the remarks about spelling but the story overcame the miscues. Since you can't give a 4.7(spelling) I gave it a 5.

I presume you really meant 'presence'!

The story was a bit like a sow's ear - wanting to be very good but marred by problems with spelling.

As others have already said - get a good proof reader!

I liked the story but that "prone" was really bugging me

...but hot?

Pooh on the naysayers. You've a gift for character development and wit. These carry you beyond the critics of the mundane. Your spelling errors were with words that spell check won't catch: moister instead of moisture, presents instead of presence, vies versa instead of vicse versa, etc. I think this fits better in erotic coupling unless you plan to write a chapter two that focuses more on the characters and story and less on their bedroom activities.

Look forward to seeing the next step in their relationship, and what else the ex may have been up to.

Excellent characters and hot as hell. Loved it.To hell with the spelling errors story is excellent, plus my brain auto corrected any mistakes.Would love to see another chapter but it's excellent as a stand alone. Well done.

the old book and cover should come into mind, as well as 1st impressions, TK U MLJ LV NV

To flesh out the romance add a chapter two. Another five by the way.

I love old cowboy stories, and this is one of the best! 5 Stars! On to the next chapter.

Exceptional storytelling, I was so into this one that I couldn't put it down.

Superb story! Beautiful and well written!

Probably one of the best sex scene descriptions that I have read on this site. Five stars from me.

Sounds like they're husband and wife. Sounds like love with the lust...