All Comments on 'Spanking Megan'

However I do understand that the wimps love this shit

If you look at my other stories, you'll see that I don't mind leaving negative comments up for all to see. I don't even mind the anonymous ones, provided they are thoughtful and insightful. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing. However, the anonymous comment below is the equivalent of a little kid spray painting some graffiti on a wall and running away. Give me a break! One other thing . . . my apologies to the hardcore BDSM fans. I submitted this story in the "Fetish" category. But for reasons known only to them, the Lit editors moved it BDSM. I'm sorry it's not what you were expecting.

http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23505512#post23505512

First let me say the writing is done very well. The only thing I did not like was the age of Megan, she could have at least been in her later 20's.

Man, you make me want to be well loved by this male protagonist. I wouldn't go for the spanking, though! How do you spell aroused? W-E-T!!!

Lovely story, Ross. I definitely found myself wishing to be in Megan's shoes! I'm eager to read more of your work in the near future.

A fun read, Ross. Was wishing I was the one bent over your knee. Look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work.

Hot! Well written and such a turn on. I would love to be Megan in this story! Will they meet up again?

Ross, looks like you have three female <b>volunteers for a spanking</b>. And a fourth is in love with the protagonist but declines the bun warming. Not bad!

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Hey, I love spanking stories. I enjoyed this one. But the spanking part was <b>a bit perfunctory</b>. No offense, but you don't seem quite as comfortable with this theme. You didn't include as many vivid details (like the quaking of the spankee's cheeky flesh) as you do in other cases. (The view in the mirror was a nice touch, though.) Your descriptions of muff-diving in other stories are great, for example. Perhaps some more <b>hands-on research</b> is called for? It's a rough chore, but somebody's got to do it! And there are so many worthy experimental subjects. Volunteers even!

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Perhaps the quick transition from punishment to reward diminished the effect.

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Hope you'll try this theme again some time. You write well.

Delicious! This is one of my absolute favorite fantasies and you carried it off perfectly. I wouldn't change a thing and right now, I'm rather envious of the leading lady!

Very hot and I *totally* enjoyed it.

Kisses and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Mr. Daniels, I am you new biggest fan. Your writing moves me. Thank you

This story makes me think of a thread on the forum. There is a very talented artist who draws many depictions of this extremely erotic act. You should look her up. I cannot remember her screen name though at this moment.

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Would love to see more like this!

Mr. Daniels,

As usual, your writing is superb. LOVED the story, as you knew I would.

I can't blame Megan for misbehaving if she knew she had this punishment to look forward to. I would love to read a follow-up story that maybe showed her repeated transgressions in an attempt for additional punishment!

I also wanted to tell you, that if you're still looking for volunteers... you know where to find me. Oh, and one more thing... I couldn't help but enjoy the wetness your story caused, and timed my climax to their final shared orgasms.

Your biggest fan (sorry TeriGirl1983),

Amie

Ross, here I am again!! this story was superb I loved it from start to finish and the punishment was both well deserved and well administered!! 5/5 yet again!!!

juci luci xx

Hi Isr...it seems you have.modelled.Megan on my inner self...i want to be ur Megan and after getting me Ravaged by other men you will treat me to the same treatment...i love ur style of writing n ur style of slow gradual love making

Awesome story