All Comments on 'Sparkin' On The Ark'

I thought the story was very truthful and the grammar was excellent... however, I felt the build-up of excitement wasn't there.

It's a lovely memory for you to have, but there was no description or erotic feeling for the rest of us.

I hope you keep writing... I found it interesting, but not something that I'll come back and want to read again... kind of like reading someone's diary with all the "good" stuff taken out.