All Comments on 'Special Order 77'

I hope either her dad or one of her brothers shows up at school on PE day so she doesn't need to have sex with someone she doesn't love. It will hurt my heart if she is forced to screw any ol person who comes along.

I really hope there will be follow up chapters to this story, it was awesome.

It would be nice that at PE she chose good looking young male teacher to fuck her. And get a bit embarrased when she notice that some people around watches them fuck. Then the next PE class she is being fucked by a good looking classmate while her best friend is also being fucked beside her.

Story but a very good read.

The spelling mistakes can be helped by using a spell-checker. That will catch words like "dises," which should be written as "diseases." The harder errors to fix are the usage errors - words that sound like they fit, but mean something else than what you intend. Like "finely" (something done delicately) instead of "finally" (as in, at last!), using "site" (a location) versus "sight" (as in to see or within someone's view).

One bugaboo that bothered me was you changed Mark to Nick on page 3.

The background of the story itself is convincingly written and well thought out. Kudos. It works as a stand-alone story, but could have additional chapters. Again, the layout of the story was first rate. Keep writing!

She doesn't have a 36 inch waist

I absolutely loved it! You should make more! I want to read about P.E. and if Linda fucks the twins!! Are you going to make more chapters? I would like to know so I can come back and check or save your page.

This story is nothing short of fantastic. It is very evident that you put a lot of thought into the plot and character development. I agree that you should have more chapters plus have Jan's father and brothers show up for her PE class. It would be nice if Jan's father got her pregnant then her brothers did likewise.

I agree spelling errors took away from flow of story. Story line is great, it is something government would do in that situation. Want to read what happens at PE class with her. How are her brothers going to handle having her available all the time?

This story has a lot more sex to be had! More, with fewer spelling errors, would be great. Yeah, an editor would be handy for ya!

Would love to read more chapters in this tale of family love and have that daughter who quit college to move home and have sex with her dad introduced into the tale, possibly at a company party with Jan going as her father's date.

Es ist eine gute Idee, als Paar zu schreiben. Das macht die weiblichen und die männlichen Aspekte der Geschichte authentischer.

Übersetzung:

"lucifers_muse" is an angel (or better two) !!

It is a good idea, writing as a couple. That makes the female and male aspects of the stoty more authentically.

Almost a five star. The spelling errors kept distracting me. I like both of the brothers being gentle with her, but she should be allowed a preverence. If the girls could log a preferred male as long as they had sex once a week, she should log her father. He could call her by Jan's mother's name when they were having sex and she could simply move into his room with him. Much more to be told, though I really like your imagination. The PE time sex really should be monitored better because some of the boys might try something painful or degrading. Overall, get a good proofreader,(not just a spellcheck program) and I'm impressed.

...On top of all this what remained of the healthcare industry that was not devoted to solving the plague had been taken over by the government to be rationed out because of the severe population losses. Now it seemed that unless it was related to you being healthy enough to get pregnant or producing a child it was almost impossible to get proper medical assistance.

@@@ now that one doesnt make any sense at all! You would think that keeping what little population they have as healthy as they can would be top priority! Hey, at least Cialis is free now, hell my pharmacy charges more for 6 pills than half a months worth of oxycontin!! Talk about getting raped! @@@

At least I didn't have PE until Wednesday. I had until then to prepare myself. I felt sorry for those girls that had PE first thing Monday. There was no way I would be ready for that.

@@@ Fuck. That. If I was a girl and a virgin, didnt have a boyfriend and wasnt ready to have sex, I'd quit school that day and hide my ass the fuck out! Hell, personally I think the country NEEDS q fifty percent reduction in the population! Yeesh. Time to start carrying stun guns ladies! @@@

I knew I didn't want my first time to be in the middle of the gym with others watching.

@@@ and NO FUCKING WAY if I were a girl would I be fucking in public!! I dont particularly care about fucking in front of other people in general, much less being forced to. ...and what did that teacher say? A little sex isnt so bad? Fuck that. Being a woman just went down the shitter, most guys would just turn into the three minute marathon man, if he lasted that long. Hey, why work at it if you can fuck three more before class is over, right! Ugh, even as a guy the plot pisses me off, hehehe, hope I can get through it so I can enjoy the story!! @@@

"Starting now you are bottomless in the house. After tonight if anyone in the house wants sex you provide it."

@@@ I love you brother, but the words 'fuck you' just keep coming to mind! Im giving you a goodie, you're helping me out, and I was gonna fuck dad anyway, but damned if Im running around naked and just bending over whenever the three of you want your dick wet! YOU run around without pants on swinging your dicks and anytime *I* want sex Ill fuck you! Hell the other way my pussy would be raw all the time! Retard. @@@

Ok Jan. The easiest way since this is your first time is for you to be on top. I will help you get started and then when you are ready you just sit down on me with all your weight. Then you can sit there until you are ready to move again."

@@@ ya know, Ive seen the 'its your first time so get on top' thing written in a number of stories... It actually kinda pisses me off. Why? Well to me the whole part of giving your virginity to someone, to me, should involve the guy actually taking it. This on top shit? She might as well just slap a dildo with a suction cup in the middle of the kitchen floor and climb on and just do it herself, cause thats what shes doing. That would just have no interest to me with a girl losing her cherry with me that way... I want to be pushing into her, my arms wrapped around her, looking her in the eyes... Whispering in her ear, licking her with my fingers pushed up in her hair holding her head, my other hand probably at the small of her back... Call me sentimental i guess... @@@

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I had never had anything larger than my fingers inside me and then just far enough to tell there was a barrier in there. The head of his dick felt much bigger than my fingers and I slowly let it inch into me. I got almost the entire head in me before I lifted up slightly then let it slide in farther.

When I felt it hit my hymen I stopped moving. "Move up and down a little to make sure everything is good and slick," he said. I did it and it felt wonderful. I would be fine if he didn't go in any further but I knew others would not hesitate.

@@@ (shaking head sadly) sigh... Umm, the hymen is OUTSIDE the vagina, not down in there somewhere. You think they'd be giving free sex education classes too! @@@

I took a deep breath and closed my eyes. I sat down hard. It felt like someone had tried to rip my legs off and punch me in the gut at the same time. And ya, I screamed and cried like a baby.

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@@@ well at least it wasnt the same ole 'its like a bee sting' shit, some of those hymens are thick and a bitch! @@@

Well after the initial brother comment, its really nice to see him treating his sister great... I like that hes explaining everything as they go... Hope the twin is the same! @@@

Jake slowly backed out of me and proceeded to wipe me and himself off. He then helped me role onto my side and straighten out my legs. They were stiff from staying in that position for so long. He got off the bed and held out his hand and helped me stand. My legs were a little wobbly but they worked.

@@@ yeah, I think I like the guys! Should be interesting when dad gets home, lol! Well if theres some quota, at least she'll hit it every day before school! Fuck that just letting any asshole that wants to bang you being able to! @@@

1st no one is being 'whored' out for the simple reason no one is being paid. Prostitution is still technically illegal but why would someone pay for something they can get for free.

@@@ riight, its slavery prostitution, just like the thousands of teen girls every year that are basically kidnapped and/or hooked on drugs and pimped out for someone elses profit while they get nothing except raped daily and beat if they mess up, or piss the pimp off, or he/she is in a mood. But when they get too old or used up or die, they can go hone free! If he doesnt kill them. This just has a much longer chain. If I was fucking my brothers, NO WAY would I let shmucks bang me at school, my pussy would already be sore, besides why let some joe blow touch me? Not! @@@

We listed to all this while we ate. When it looked like he was finally done I spoke, "Now you see dad. The only difference I have from his daughter is that I have not finished high school yet. I don't think me dropping out and marrying you would help any of us. But staying in school means I get sex there if I want it or not now. That is why I want to know what it is like with someone I love before I have to have it with someone I don't care about."

@@@ I'd drop the fuck out TODAY, stay home till I was pregnant then go back to school and finish up, or just get my ged. Screw the idea of a bunch of skeezers banging me! Lol @@@

What is with these two that they have to constantly touch my butt?

@@@ if I dont squeeze my wifes ass at least twice a day I feel deprived ;) @@@

"If you will let me Jan I would like to lick your pussy first. It has been so long and your mother used to love that before we did it."

@@@ Hell, that would be my requirement in gym class, wanna fuck me? You lick it first! @@@

Well dad went along fairly easily :) I like how she word played on him to get what she wanted though! Ironically Im perfectly happy with the story ending here. Definately the most novel plot Ive seen in a long time! Good job!

Write on :)

....oh hell, I could finally get a shot at four, no five cousins Ive been dying to fuck senseless! Lol.

But overall ok. The previous comentor who is longwinded is wrong on a number of points. Firstly: the cowgirl position IS the best for a virgin. She is in control, and as she is about to have some pain she should be the one to decide when it happens. She can sit down on him to break the Hymen and sit still until the burn subsides. Usually a man just follows natural instinct and keeps on pumping, pain or not. Another thing. Are you ignorant of female anatomy? The Hymen is located a short distance inside the opening of the vagina, not outside. I know. College Anatomy and Physiology was a subject I had to study many hours for. This is not a bad concept for a story. Bio-warfare is a very real monster-in-the-closet. It has been used, largely unsuccessfully, by terrorists for centuries. In ancient Europe when there were fortified cities, some would-be conqerors took to catapulting diseased and decaying bodies over the walls to infect and kill the residents. The problem for the people who want to use bio-weapons is the method of delivery. Otherwise disease warfare is a cheap kill and could easily decimate a population. This sort of thing (special order 77) though greatly exagerrated, might even be considered as a viable option by some twisted old perverts holding office in washington. It WOULD seem that the Healthcare system would be beefed up instead of becoming worse, to preserve the diminshing population. I imagine elder-care would suffer though. Incest would probably still be illegal, though. A breeding population would need, above all, healthy babies born and there is always the slightly heightened chance of recessive genes rearing their ugly heads in the form of birth defects. Genetic manipulation and Genetic cleansing might become a problem Good Story.

I really liked this story and I agree there were some grammatical errors but overall my only complaint was the title. I mean, this IS Literotica. You should have called it "Special order 69:)"

Great job BTW.

Unfortunately, I read this one, twice. My first read made me think that this was a good story, in fact as I remembered it I thought of it as a favorite. On the second read however, I took a detailed look and found that while the story had an interesting premise, the characters were flat, one-dimensional, and really quite boring. Then there was the abysmal lack of reverence for or familiarity with the English language. A literate editor, with hours to spare could, after multiple passes through this verbal morass, raise the quality to that of a moderately competent FIRST DRAFT, but making it worthy of publishing would entail herculean effort. The obstacles to overcome include:

Principal (principal)

less than two week (weeks)

PERSON had no more than 10 years left before (-THEIR BODIES) (his/her body) (2)

contacts or sunglasses . . . spitting, coughing, or sneezing would infect scores of people (WHAT IS THE CONNECTION BETWEEN CONTACTS AND SUNGLASSES AND INFECTION???? I CAN SPIT, COUGH, AND SNEEZE WITH OR WITHOUT EITHER!!!! WHY BAN THEM???? )

repopulate as quickly as possible to avoid being overtaken by this crippling disease (HOW WOULD RAPID REPOPULATION PREVENT ‘BEING OVERTAKEN BY THIS . . . DISEASE???? MOST PEOPLE HAVE HAD VACCINATIONS MAKING THEM NO LONGER SUBJECT TO CONTAGION!!!! WHAT DOES BEING OVERTAKEN MEAN ANYWAY???? ITS JUST NOT CLEAR!!!!)

that would (who) (2)

they (he/she) (20)

dieses (diseases)

out of site (sight)

class room (classroom)

with HER there if available, otherwise any male wishing to have sex with THEM (STARTS OUT AS HER AND THEN INEXPLICABLY TALKS ABOUT THEM!!!! WHO ARE THEY AND WHAT ABOUT HER????)

Male (male)

A female teacher that does not have a male with her is open to any male the same any male teacher (ONLY A MALE TEACHER, NOT ANY MALE STUDENT????) may approach any female on the mats that is not currently occupied (WHAT ABOUT A FEMALE TEACHER APPROACHING A MALE TEACHER OR STUDENT????)

appealed (to me)

live-in made (maid)

some times (sometimes)

brothers room (brothers’)

you putting (it) in front

laying on him (lying) (3)

my cherry broke (broken)

role onto my side (roll)

occasional (occasionally)

next to wonder in (wander)

half way (halfway) (2)

mouth full (mouthful)

lose you to (too)

Jakes face (Jake’s)

sleep over (sleepover)

double teamed (double-teamed)

thumb prints (thumbprints)

EACH FEMALE is to take a box with THEM when THEY leave (SINGULAR/PLURAL/PLURAL!!!!)

with them please bring it (PLURAL/SINGULAR)

yes's (yeses)

Tuesday's (Tuesdays)

bunch of boy (boys)

take the other place (other’s) (2)

girls were (there) including Miss Jameson

new higher (hire)

someone get home. I knew they (SINGULAR/PLURAL)

legs were strait (straight)

want to have it (with) you

sat the table (set) (2)

across my but (butt)

half naked ( half-naked)

A TEACHER was having sex with the student THEY got fired (SINGULAR/PLURAL)

dad (Dad) (5)

finely (finally)

tongue in my (pussy)

tongue when in (went)

when he sunk (sank)

NEEDLESS TO SAY THE IDEA OF READING THIS AGAIN IS MOST UNPLEASANT AND EVEN MORE UNLIKELY!!!!

I absolutely loved this story.... This was amazing. My father was a journalist and editor. I always read things critically. I don't care about any errors that may have been made. The story line was awesome. Thank you so much for sharing.

I just re-read the story. I hope the author will continue this tale soon.

She did not use the logging devise. Otherwise I love the family sex.

get an editor

spelling and using wrong word spoils story

Honestly man, amazing job so far. The Canario is just great and the sex better, please continue this, and good work, seriously.

As I read, I thought: what a creative mind to think up imaginary Special Order 77 and its specifications along with the ramifications of how it is impacting individuals in a dramatically altered society. This was carried out with equally imaginative and great dialog that made the story "pop."

With admiration,

Paul in Oklahoma

Dearest lucifers_muse,

Damn, damn, damn! What a hot story. Anymore chapters? If not, consider writing one of two. (Pretty please.)

GG

they forgot to use the logging device. good read but she should drop out of school and just have her family take care of her.

Loved the story in fact I think Some Sex games on pornhub are based off Literotica stories.

I hope someone makes an Adaptation of it as a Story for either a 3d novel or pornhub movie.

🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞 And I'm a big fan of her being bottomless at home. Sexy.

I would like to hear about the Sexy teachers more. How big is her school? How many women teachers? How are other girls in other schools doing? This has the potential to be an ongoing series connected across different walks of life.

Like how does Special order77 effect the workplace? Or public spaces?

I also want to hear about Her experience in PE.

Does she go Naked or Bottomless?

Who are her Teachers? What do her teachers look like? The girls who are bottomless what kind of tops are they wearing? Tight fitting Ts or loose fitting?

what are tier hips asses and pussies like?

When you write the next part of Special order77 please tell us more about PE and what the students and teachers are like.

Yes I know this is redundant to a previous comment but hear me out.

I want to know more about miss Rosemont, miss Jameson, and please don't Gloss over Miss mede!

What was Miss mede doing? Was she getting fondled?

Was she just watching?

And what about miss Jameson?

If she's naked she obviously has her Boobs out it's redundant. Do we get details about what Jameson was wearing before PE?

I want to imagine her stripping.

And finally miss Rosemont. What outfit does she wear? Give me details of what she does in PE.

WHAT Are Regular classes like?

Do people just stay naked all day if Thier exhibitionist?

What classes do the teachers teach?

Who is the PE Teacher not just the name but the character, male/female, Naked clothed, aggressive/Nice???

Please add a Bottomless Tag

Very sensual and erotic story!