- Romance
- Speechless Ch. 01
- Page 2
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'I'll have to drain out the water anyways.' I though as I undid my trunks.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoPlease write more, sure their are some errors but this is Truely good writing and a good story!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoGood story. Good construction. You need to get someone to edit your stories. There are a lot of errors.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWriting was a bit awkward in places, but I enjoyed reading the story. Hopefully, the next update will be longer.
Also, I'm glad that Sam decided to break up with his current gf before boning Gwen.
Sid0604about 10 years agoI enjoyed reading your story so far and hope you decide to continue. Thank you for sharing.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWOW...one hell of a story so far. Yes, u had some grammactical errors but not overwhelming. Just keep the story line more towards the girl & U. Don't know how deep u r into your present g/f but I dare U to make the switch slowly though. Its your story but try to keep it endearing & as romantic as u can. Looks like u r going to have fun writing the rest of it. How long is Mommy going to stay do u think?
I dont know where u live or anything about u yet, but if u need a proof reader as someone else suggested I would be happy to lend u a hand. Let me know OK.
Best of Luck with the next chapters......Denny
