by professorjames
Your writing style is excellent. Smooth and realistic. I love the characters.
Alex's story is very interesting. However, the play and sex between Judy and Paul is fantastic! This chapter is the best yet! Every couple should be so lucky. My Dom and I are just getting to know each other and I look forward to him doing to me what Paul shared with Judy. I can't wait for him to read this story, or better yet, for us to read it to each other. A terrific story for a couple to share with each other.