by mitchawa
He pummled her like a long horn steer? A steer is a castrated male
Cow, so not a lot of pummling going on! or does the hero just fuck a lot of cows? Lol
decent but way too rushed, it could have been drawn out longer. more detail to the sex, what happened while she was in the hospital and the week leading up to the line dancing date....things like that.
Romantic story with a good bout of sex. If it isn't your cup of tea, no need to be nasty and derogatory. Well written, no recurring spelling errors if any at all, and finally, a good fantasy, basically what L is all about. 5*