by TheBigandBaldGuy
your writing is amazing and never ceases to make my little pussy wett :) ahh i love this army slut heheh
Excellent. I especially like the historical twist. Well thought out, deliciously erotic, and entertaining.
I really loved this story, wanted to hear more about her ass being taken for the first time. The Kings name cracked me up! Want to know what happens to Cassandra next!
That was just...Wow. I am so wet right now, I can't even think properly to leave a good review, other than...Wow.
THIS SOUNDS VERY CLOSE TO THE MOVIE TROY. I COULD NOT EVEN GET THROUGH THE FIRST HALF OF THE PAGE. HORRIBLE
This reminded me a lot of Achilles and Briseis in Troy. I did like that the king in this story was a bit rougher with the girl, though.
Horrible. Writing lacked any skill, and plot was atrocious. I could not finish. You must have wanted to simply hack off over an idea.
It sucked ! Big time.! Dont write any more stories at all.It was awful .If youre going to write stories ,make them believeable ,not like this piece of crap .!
While the writing and flow of the story was lacking, the story itself has me hooked and I've reread it many times! A victorious king. Virgin whore. Army gang bang. Gets me wet every time!