All Comments on 'Spoils of War'

by TheBigandBaldGuy

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Natalya555Natalya555over 14 years ago
LOVE IT

your writing is amazing and never ceases to make my little pussy wett :) ahh i love this army slut heheh

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cassandra wanna-be

Excellent. I especially like the historical twist. Well thought out, deliciously erotic, and entertaining.

nitaspankinnitaspankinover 13 years ago

I really loved this story, wanted to hear more about her ass being taken for the first time. The Kings name cracked me up! Want to know what happens to Cassandra next!

reyapetreyapetover 13 years ago
Wow.

That was just...Wow. I am so wet right now, I can't even think properly to leave a good review, other than...Wow.

jj1931jj1931over 12 years ago
COPY

THIS SOUNDS VERY CLOSE TO THE MOVIE TROY. I COULD NOT EVEN GET THROUGH THE FIRST HALF OF THE PAGE. HORRIBLE

phalanx_888phalanx_888over 12 years ago

This reminded me a lot of Achilles and Briseis in Troy. I did like that the king in this story was a bit rougher with the girl, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmmm. . .

Horrible. Writing lacked any skill, and plot was atrocious. I could not finish. You must have wanted to simply hack off over an idea.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What a waste of time !

It sucked ! Big time.! Dont write any more stories at all.It was awful .If youre going to write stories ,make them believeable ,not like this piece of crap .!

FrivolousFrivolousover 5 years ago

Great story. I love post-battle gang bangs by victorious soldiers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Rough & Arousing

While the writing and flow of the story was lacking, the story itself has me hooked and I've reread it many times! A victorious king. Virgin whore. Army gang bang. Gets me wet every time!

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