All Comments on 'Spoils of War Ch. 03'

by HammerGod

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Dravin_BlackDravin_Blackover 11 years ago
this is getting good

don't worry about the male-dom it's realy not super important infact one of the things i realy injoy about this story so far is that Keira seems to be genuinely kind and to care about Sven. Thats not to say she won't kick his ass if he gets out of line. but at least she is not a sudistic psychopath like you see in most of these storys

i can't wait for the next chapter

5 stars

VacentsVacentsover 11 years ago
Yes Yes Yes !!!!!

This keeps getting better and better. 5 out 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent

So far, one of the best stories on here I have read. Your writing style is excellent while at the same time makes easy reading. Characterisation, story - brilliant. Don't change anything.

J0SEJ0SEover 11 years ago
YEAH!!

The excitement is rising & the plot is thickening! MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more

Please keep writing it is a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Xomment

Well thats it I have lost any and all sympathy I had for the Magnus character if this was his doing.

I may despise rapists and slavers in all their forms, but child killers are the lowest scum on earth

YDB95YDB95over 9 years ago
Keep up the great work!

I'm loving this series so far...hope there are many more installments to come.

ZoaruonZoaruonover 8 years ago
Awesome!!!

Awesome!!! Absolutely love it!!! Keep writing man!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
you need to publish this!

Its a real page turner. I love the social complexity and the details of life. Waiting for the plot to unfold.

GayKatGayKatalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant And Well Written,,, Yes!

Hallo HG!

Your story "Spoils of War" Ch. 03 is bloody will written, not as hot and sexy as Ch. 01 and 02, but it's still a bloody good story!

And here's another 5-Stars, thank-you!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat.

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