All Comments on 'Spontaneous Combustion'

Great story. I was drawn in totally. I like the idea of a challenge and her being taken in a way that was attractive to her. Wonder if the old man set it up? Perhaps he knew she needed more than the bag to work things out on. Hope there will be a second part.

You managed a great ballance between what the charictars were feeling and what they were doing. So many authors tend to give you too much of one or the other.

That was hot!

Wow.

Thankyou!

I realize looking at your stories that it has been several years since you submitted a story. This story would be a great one to add more chapters to. Thanks!