All Comments on 'Spring Break at Home'

I always had a yearning to do it with my sister. May still have a chance.

Please tell me you're writing more of these???

It stands to reason that when Victor finally gets back, Lilah is going to give it up to him and Sam's idealistic and romantic heart is going to break a little. What really happens is up for the imagination, but I have no plans to continue this series. Thanks for the positive feedback though, and please feel free to browse my other works.

Seriously, you eluded to more of Lilah's plans. As well, the under tone of an overall plan by Lilah and Annabelle. Even Sam had found the incriminating evidence they could use to take Victor for at least half his money, if not more. So, write on and tell the rest of the story. Sam surely gets to have both Lilah's and Annabelle's tight asses.

So if/when you do write your next one, do keep me in mind to edit it again. I can't wait to find out what happens.

I really liked the part about Victor's encounters with the hookers; they sound a lot like inspirational material for your illustrations.

Great story.

I was hoping that her brother would cause Annabelle to become very attached to her brother's ability to please her and want him all of the time which makes Lilah jealous and she becomes very aggressive in wanting him as her lover too.

I hope that the three of them find a way to make Victor pay for all of the dirty and underhanded schemes he has pulled on his wife and daughter.

Want to know when you will write a second part to this story.

Especially if they get revenge on Victor.

or is it Inquiring? Perhaps it's like color and colour. I did begin to write the sequel, and honestly I find this is a hot story worthy of development, but I suspect in doing so I would be writing more of a drama than a series of sex scenes. Who really wants to read half a lit page of sex while waiting for the revenge plot to unfold? Are people even horny when plotting a reprisal against the family patriarch? Would they instead find reconciliation? These questions bugged me as I tried to write, and so now I'm not sure I will ever publish what I have so far written.. as I'm not sure how to finish it. I am working on other stuff though.

Yes lots more of this please. Looking forward to seeing how they get rid of the father.

waiting for the next chapter

Stopped reading at "uncommonly well endowed"