All Comments on 'Spring's Eve'

by Otus de la Nuit

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very nice

i could see this all happening as i read it

very nice pace and i liked her getting fucked on the way home

keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Tender and believable

You are a wonderful writer with a great command of vocabulary and what seem to me to be an excellent grasp of real human feelings. I really enjoyed the timing and the build up of sensuality. This is a very good story. Please write more.

writerjabwriterjabover 12 years ago
Awesome!

I just read "Spring's Eve" and thought it a masterpiece! You're a great author, I hope you write more!

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