by Otus de la Nuit
i could see this all happening as i read it
very nice pace and i liked her getting fucked on the way home
keep up the good work
You are a wonderful writer with a great command of vocabulary and what seem to me to be an excellent grasp of real human feelings. I really enjoyed the timing and the build up of sensuality. This is a very good story. Please write more.
I just read "Spring's Eve" and thought it a masterpiece! You're a great author, I hope you write more!