All Comments on 'St. Clair Ladies Circle: Beginnings'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
As erotic as a medical textbook

Some parts of this story are outstanding, the idea that some of the men lose their masculinity for good. But the biggest part of it is a turn-off: the overly graphic descriptions of "feces, blood and lubricant" from the protagonist's anus, the incessant graphic depictions of a penis as if no one would know what it looked like, and the lack of logic in the story. This seemed to have potential but the author's real fetish is gross-out imagery. Well, he can have it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fair is only fair...

I'd like to hear of this William character taking a fist or baseball bat or something similar up his ass without being properly prepared.

P.S.: Ever heard of Viagra? That should work...

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