by MrKitty
Please continue this story.This story is the first to make me want to comment. Loved the romance and reality of it al.
I really liked it. Usually interracial means black men wanting white women. The big taboo so to speak you want what you cant have. You made these characters believable. You gave them personality and brought us into their train of thought. I truly believe this is the first interracial story I've given a 100 %. Thanks
Absolutely the best story I've read in this category. Thank you for your Christmas present.
Kathi
This was absolutely wonderful! It's one of the best I've ever read.
Nice chatacter development, a well written tale for needed Christmas cheer.
This is one of the sweetest stories I've read on here in a long time. You did an excellent job showcasing how a lot of people feel during this time of year.
Hope to read more of your work in the future...
This is sooo sweet. I loved this story. The characters were believable and sensitive. The sex was hot and I just loved it.
You're story is one of the sweetest, romantic, touching things I've read. I teared up more than once, and one or two fell when Marcy told her sister about Santa staying. I can't wait to read more of your work...I'm jealous :-)
Usually I don't look at "Interracial" stories, because it is about some white --- usually blonde, like those prostitutes on cheap, $5 videos --- fucking multiple high school drop-out Black brothers, each sporting a 12 inch dick, White women who are willing to forgo their 25 year in the suburb, which included kids in high school or college, a new Lexus or BMW, after one night of fucking and being dumped on,,, <p>
But this one is actually a little Christmas story where the characters just happened to be Blacks and Whites..... It's too short and so there's little character development; but for its length, it's rather well done enough.....
I enjoyed every word-- just beautiful and ohh so romantic. Thank you for such a wonderful story. Very creative with the story and character development. Encore! Encore!
You're a very talented writer and I would love to read more. What I especially like is that you took what Christmas is about - love, hope, light and warmth in the dark cold of winter - and really ran with it.
There's a fair amount of the sordid and degrading on this site - and I enjoy that too, to be perfectly frank - but it's a joy to see sex being celebrated for all that it can be and how redeeming it can be. Thank you! It was wonderful!
What a nice way to start the Christmas season. I loved it. Thanks
It was one of the best displays of literary work I've read in a while. It was full of passion and hope and everything that Christmas should be about. Truly heartwarming.
Thank you. This was wonderful and though I generally dislike this season, you made me feel "happy" for a short spell.
and has something for everyone.....holiday cheer, believable characters, even good sex! Best of luck in the contest, even if you don't win you can pat yourself on the back for having penned this magnificent piece!
The HOT-HOT SEX between these two deeply scarred but profoundly loving people is passionate, sweet, and selflessly generous. Her two young daughters easily and very correctly accept him into their lives without a qualm. And this even though he's replaced their dead dad in mom's bed. This story is a nearly perfect romance. I love it a WHOLE bunch!!
So sweet, believable, and sexy. The sex was hot, the romance was touching, and I loved the character development. It made me cry a few times. And it's neat to read this after having read the sequel; you do a very convincing job telling a story from both the man and the woman's side. (And I loved the Obama references! :)
I Loved this story. I hope its true. I have dreamed of meeting a beautiful woman filled with Love. One day, one day ....
It was a wonderful read
Best story I ever read. Gives hope to people who feel they are alone. Whether it is depression or the loss of a loved one. Kudos to the author!
Probably one of the nicest story on literotica.
I see many Holiday themed sequels in the future.
New Years,
MLK birthday
Presidents Day
you already have Valentines Day
St. Patricks
and,
and,
and,
...those are just droplets of water you've managed to make it appear and flow down my eyes....how "bad" of you.... happy holidays!
Thank you for writing such a beautiful heartwarming story full of LOVE! It really touched me!
5 stars!
I loved it, it was nice and romantic and the sex was steamy!
My only quibble is: where did Rick get all this money? He was on the verge of suicide from losing it all in the divorce, and now he can buy tons of gifts for the kids and a new car for Nicole? I don't think mall Santas make that much money.
5 stars anyway!