All Comments on 'St. Nicole's Christmas Miracle'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So Sweet

Please continue this story.This story is the first to make me want to comment. Loved the romance and reality of it al.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunterover 15 years ago
Just great

I really liked it. Usually interracial means black men wanting white women. The big taboo so to speak you want what you cant have. You made these characters believable. You gave them personality and brought us into their train of thought. I truly believe this is the first interracial story I've given a 100 %. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
xmas

This story deserves to win .Realistic and well written.

KathiKathiover 15 years ago
Superb

Absolutely the best story I've read in this category. Thank you for your Christmas present.

Kathi

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 15 years ago
Holy Christmas Angels!!

Thank you for a superb read!! Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
God bless you!

This was absolutely wonderful! It's one of the best I've ever read.

mekakymekakyover 15 years ago
love it

great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ho Ho ho

Nice chatacter development, a well written tale for needed Christmas cheer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Put me in the Mood for Love

This is one of the sweetest stories I've read on here in a long time. You did an excellent job showcasing how a lot of people feel during this time of year.

Hope to read more of your work in the future...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
loved it

This was a beautiful Christmas story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I had to pull out the klenex

This is sooo sweet. I loved this story. The characters were believable and sensitive. The sex was hot and I just loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
This story is too real

not too be true. It gives me hope.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 15 years ago
Beautiful

You're story is one of the sweetest, romantic, touching things I've read. I teared up more than once, and one or two fell when Marcy told her sister about Santa staying. I can't wait to read more of your work...I'm jealous :-)

crazygirrlcrazygirrlover 15 years ago
Christmas Cheer

I loved it.

GenghisKhanGenghisKhanover 15 years ago
Interesting little story

Usually I don't look at "Interracial" stories, because it is about some white --- usually blonde, like those prostitutes on cheap, $5 videos --- fucking multiple high school drop-out Black brothers, each sporting a 12 inch dick, White women who are willing to forgo their 25 year in the suburb, which included kids in high school or college, a new Lexus or BMW, after one night of fucking and being dumped on,,, <p>

But this one is actually a little Christmas story where the characters just happened to be Blacks and Whites..... It's too short and so there's little character development; but for its length, it's rather well done enough.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Truly Beautiful

I enjoyed every word-- just beautiful and ohh so romantic. Thank you for such a wonderful story. Very creative with the story and character development. Encore! Encore!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
just beautiful!

the best story to start the season !

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 15 years ago
Marvelous storytelling

Thank you for sharing.

wildwildbestwildwildbestover 15 years ago
beautiful

beautiful...truly beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thank you

Great story to start the season.

bluechick1976bluechick1976over 15 years ago
Heartwarming and sincere

You're a very talented writer and I would love to read more. What I especially like is that you took what Christmas is about - love, hope, light and warmth in the dark cold of winter - and really ran with it.

There's a fair amount of the sordid and degrading on this site - and I enjoy that too, to be perfectly frank - but it's a joy to see sex being celebrated for all that it can be and how redeeming it can be. Thank you! It was wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I agree with the other posts, well done

What a nice way to start the Christmas season. I loved it. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Amazing!

It was one of the best displays of literary work I've read in a while. It was full of passion and hope and everything that Christmas should be about. Truly heartwarming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wonderful......can you be my Santa too?

Thank you. This was wonderful and though I generally dislike this season, you made me feel "happy" for a short spell.

sacksackover 15 years ago
much better than the normal run in this category..

and has something for everyone.....holiday cheer, believable characters, even good sex! Best of luck in the contest, even if you don't win you can pat yourself on the back for having penned this magnificent piece!

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 15 years ago
Santa Loves His Saint

The HOT-HOT SEX between these two deeply scarred but profoundly loving people is passionate, sweet, and selflessly generous. Her two young daughters easily and very correctly accept him into their lives without a qualm. And this even though he's replaced their dead dad in mom's bed. This story is a nearly perfect romance. I love it a WHOLE bunch!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Beautiful!

So sweet, believable, and sexy. The sex was hot, the romance was touching, and I loved the character development. It made me cry a few times. And it's neat to read this after having read the sequel; you do a very convincing job telling a story from both the man and the woman's side. (And I loved the Obama references! :)

Gary13Gary13about 15 years ago
A Beautiful Story

I can't wait to read more of your stories.

SerranoirSerranoirabout 15 years ago
What can I say??

It may me cry... good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story

Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
amazing

this was beautiful simply beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Beautiful

I absolutely love this; great plot, great everything. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
its like a story from chicken soup for the soul.

I Loved this story. I hope its true. I have dreamed of meeting a beautiful woman filled with Love. One day, one day ....

PTBzzzzPTBzzzzabout 12 years ago
I can not believe there are no comments on this story

It was a wonderful read

adt2700adt2700about 12 years ago
Great Job!

What a wonderful feel good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
*****

Lovely story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AMAZING

Best story I ever read. Gives hope to people who feel they are alone. Whether it is depression or the loss of a loved one. Kudos to the author!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Please continue.

I would love to see where life takes them from here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Probably the best story I've read so far.

Probably one of the nicest story on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
QMQ

Im not crying. My eyes are just really sweaty.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
Since this beautiful story was a long ago seasonal contest entry

I see many Holiday themed sequels in the future.

New Years,

MLK birthday

Presidents Day

you already have Valentines Day

St. Patricks

and,

and,

and,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lovely

Thank you for a lovely story!

oorah_sbjoorah_sbjover 9 years ago
oooooooooooooooooooooooo

...those are just droplets of water you've managed to make it appear and flow down my eyes....how "bad" of you.... happy holidays!

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 8 years ago
Beautiful story!

Thank you for writing such a beautiful heartwarming story full of LOVE! It really touched me!

5 stars!

oldwayneoldwayneover 8 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!

IT WAS A WONDERFUL AND VERY TOUCHING LOVE STORY...FIVE STARS!

JudyLeeJudyLeealmost 8 years ago
Nice.

A very sweet Christmas Story. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Oh Wow...

I'm speechless. I don't know what to say. It was beautiful. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved it

I hate sappy Hallmark movies, but I really loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lovely story!

I loved it, it was nice and romantic and the sex was steamy!

My only quibble is: where did Rick get all this money? He was on the verge of suicide from losing it all in the divorce, and now he can buy tons of gifts for the kids and a new car for Nicole? I don't think mall Santas make that much money.

5 stars anyway!

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