All Comments on 'Stacy wants to Play Ch. 06'

Love this series, thank you!

This is a fantastic story but when you write in the first person and change the POV (point of view) you really need to warn the reader somehow. I was confused through half of this chapter because I was still assuming Lacy's POV! But even I managed to figure it out eventually, that we were in a totally different girl's head.

No way they could have that little orgy without having any calories with lunch, the're coach really should write them up a non-Hollywood diet.