by Massageguy
I thought it was amazing. Your words are everyone's dream whether they want to admit it or not. I Love it and if others don't, they have no clue what Great writing is.
You most certainly gave us all something to talk about. This was very well written and risky considering the song but I love it and most people I have talked to that have read it, LOVE it. The question... when is part 2 coming? Or maybe the real question is when will I be cumming again? Congrats on the first story being a hit. Once again, Thanks for the story and please continue with another chapter.
“My daughter’s bed.” - sooo wicked! And your "mommy" dialogue was great.
Keep it up! R.