All Comments on 'Stacy's Story'

I was hoping to read that she was fulfilled by her brother. She finally became a woman and lost her virginity. Maybe her and her brother find that they really love each other and want to have a real man and woman relationship. Once they have each other sexually they can't get enough and move in to a place of their own. Another chapter is needed to finish the story. Thanks for this story and will be watching for more of your work.....Rich

This was a very good start to your writing. Yes, you could use an editor but it didn't disrupt the flow. I hope you will continue, especially with this story line.

You're new, it's your first writing, and as such it's pretty damn good! It's way better than some of the crap that comes along. I'm openly critical of that stuff, so I should also be supportive of those who make the attempt to be good. Keep up the effort.

I really enjoyed your story and thought it was very well written, I thought the characterisation of Stacey in particular was very strong. With regards to other people advising you to use an editor, I didn't personal feel it was necessary for your work. Keep it up!!

I like your writing style. The characters are real. The sensuality is fabulous. Another Lovely story.

it seemed very hard to get and keep interested in this story. i don't know if something was missing or if it was just the way you write but i had a hard time finishing this chapter, it just didn't hold my interest.

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