All Comments on 'Star Struck Ch. 01'

The ending was kind of abrupt, but other than that this was pretty good.

The ending was too abrupt. I get the sense of the fact that you crafted a good story and then got tired of it. Well it does say ch. 1 so I assume there's more coming. You write well.

Nice story...chapter 2 coming up?

I liked the story. It was very interesting both as a story and as an erotic tale. Good job !

This was quite well written. I have to admit that I thoroughly enjoyed it so far. The characters are mostly believable and I like that they aren't completely without faults or issues. The ending of the chapter was a little abrupt, but it's definitely a nice little cliffhanger to keep a reader interested in the next chapter. Can't wait to read it!

Very well written. Some actual character development and the promise of a very entertaining long term story. Oh and of course some well written hot sex.

I'd treat the comments of "the ending was abrupt" to mean "I wanted to read more of the story and was disappointed there wasn't more."

Overall one of the best stories I've seen on here in a while. I can't wait for the next part.

was really good, cant wait 4 chapter 2

More interesting than many, thanks for writing.

Will eagerly read the further chapters.

Call a Company and tell Them to make this whole series into one long porn movie!!

I'd watch that...

So what exactly did Angela write in his Yearbook?

Wow, I hooked! Every nerd’s dream.

Great fantasy and every boys dream.

Your best so far. I've read a number of your stories, but this is the best so far, and not because it involves a porn star. Sometimes, you seem to rush to the group sex, and I can barely remember who's who. This time, you managed to develop the main characters' personalities (and the grandmother's). You've also given them layers, revealing a little more as time goes on. That was well done. And then they have sex several times (excellent scenes, by the way), and I care more because your characters are better developed.