by HandcuffGirl
This was great, and it seems to be leading up directly to a sequel! I hope she actually gets fucked in the next one.
Good pacing, and a nice combination of procedural detail and description of sensations experienced. Shoehorning a sexual encounter into the story would not have added to it in any meaningful way, and would have cluttered up your narrative. This was just the sort of story I was looking for. Thanks! ^_^
OK, this was an unexpected story, but damnit, i loved it. You write the best Star Wars stories. You've written a hell of a lot and still i find myself wishing you had written more. Well done once again.
I enjoyed this, but was hoping there would be more to it. And curious as to why there are mentions of the decontamination in future stories, but there isn't any mention of the bar code, or have I just missed it as I've not read all the stories yet.
Good story, but I hoped for a bit more sex along with the humiliation. Still, it was good.
Please write more for this story line. Or even any of your Star Wars stories. They are the best I've read on this site.
What happens next, how much humiliation is jainia put through and how many other jedi are caught in the trap.