All Comments on 'Starcrossed Ch. 03'

I'm usually not into futuristic story lines, tending towards the non-human/supernatural line of reading, but the first chapter got me well and truly hooked. :-) I like the interwoven relationships and the surprise in finding a compatible wife. I'm looking forward to seeing where their relationship goes, what happens when/if Deena finds out about Erina and Laen (and how she handles it), and whatever else pops up in the story line. All in all the characters come across as very real, and I find it easy to care about each of them. Great job....and I'll keep checking back for updates!

...a threesome with Fain and Alex. I'll pretend to know about old Aristos if they're willing to lower themselves to an Earth girl.

I love this story so far! I keep watching for the new chapters!!! cant wait for more!

I really like this series. I'm kind of curious about Erina's origins and what exactly her plan is for the future. Hopefully none of them conflict with Deena and Alex, because Deena is such a sweetheart, although a bit more uh...passionate...than I previously thought, lol.

But I'm not in charge of the story, you are, and as you put at the beginning of the chapter, I agree that 'something different' isn't a bad thing at all. So what I'm saying is, even if you rip my heart out later on, I'll still keep coming back for more.

Consider me a masochist.

Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter! xoxo-Lily.

Thanks so much for the update. The story is great so far and I really enjoy it and can't wait for each new chapter. I really like all the characters but Alex and Erina especially.

This chapter was great but now I have absolutely no idea where you are going with it. At this point I think that is good because it's really surprising.

The only thing I'm sort of dreading is the bubble of Alex and Deena bursting since I generally don't care for overblown and melodramatic conflicts and confrontations especially ones that come out of misunderstanding. However I'm not too worried since based on your previous stories you handle and resolve these issues very well so I hope that holds true here as well. But at the same time I think this is also the best thing you've ever written as well.

Please keep up the great work and thanks for continuing the story.

Good job.

I think this story has the possibility of being your best story yet. This story seems much more in-depth than your previous storys.

You said at the beginning of chapter 1 that you've been working on this story for over a year now and it shows. Your characters have much more to them than previous characters you have written about. And it appears there will be more locations than either Cloe's Girls or Pushover had.

Maybe being inspired by authors like Cedar has been a really good thing for you, being a fan of hers can't hurt. (Yes, I'm a fan of Cedar_Needle also). Maybe I'm just glad that you've finally taken the jump to non-human.

Either way this by far has the potential to be your best work yet. I'm really eager to read the next chapter and will be watching daily for updates. I honestly wish you the best of luck w/this story.

I check for a new chapter every freaking day

I've been worried all along about multiple relationships, but this ending I was not expecting - brilliant writing!! You're good!

"With a sharp thrust he was inside her, spearing through her maidenhead and into her gripping pussy. Deena gasped at the sharp pain, grabbing Alex's shoulders with her nails."

I´m sorry, what?

I get that this is a fantasynovell, but still...please do some research on the hymen. The maidenhead is a bloody myth.