All Comments on 'Starting Over Ch. 02'

Very good but I have a few problems you could correct soon. Find a book or have an editor who knows about firearms/pistols. The Glock 19 like all glocks does not have a safety as such, meaning one you can 'click' on or off. The safety of the glock is built into the trigger and is activated by correct grip and trigger pull. neither does the Glock have a hammer as Glocks are all striker fired handguns. As a firearms enthusiast (gun nut) I get bothered by errors like this. Okay the drug gang seemed a little too restrained for my taste, but I could be wrong as the only drug gang people I am familiar with were the ones I guarded in prison.

He definitely needs to get more of Mary and should include young dancers to his menu, but he is who he is so I will let that go, for now. I am enjoying the story so far and hope for much more from John and his new job. Thank you

This is a good read except the Glock safety part. A lot of writers here have an affinity for Glocks (so do I)but they don't have a thumb safety that is switched on and off.

No safety and no hammer, it's called "striker fired" for a reason. Your actions comments would have worked perfectly for the Berretta pistol carried by our line troops.

Oh damn, too late to beat you up about Glock features. Pretty good story so far, looking forward to the next chapter.

Nothing like hanging us over a cliff.... He could die you know...

The fact that know nothing about guns is an advantage in enjoying a story.

Now, he has six potentials on line. I think that her room-mate hit him..

I am not a gun expert, so I can't comment on the Glock description. However, like the other comments, I am enjoying the story so far, but have an issue that is bugging me. In your description of the characters, Marie Jackson can not be John's widow. If she was, that would mean she is alive and John is dead. A correct description would be John's recently deceased wife. Looking forward to the next installment.

I'm enjoying your story so far and looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for sharing, but ... you ought to learn about the handgun you're writing about - the description of the Glock was way off!

Good start