by JessyHo22
some bits turned me on and the ending made me lol. i dont think ive ever read a story like this, like a retelling story. i dont know why but yeh not too shabby
Great job. I cold picture it in my mind just like I was there. Write more soon please
It took me a bit to get into the story as the build up seemed a little slow and scattered but I'm glad I read it all the way through.
This is the type of story i generally enjoy reading. Just scattered enough with just the right amount of bad decision making to make the reader wonder "did this actually happen? No. Well, maybe"
Keep up the good work
The style was a little sloppy at times, but mostly a very creative use of first person. Was also glad at the positive comments from other readers, I've seen unique stories like this get trashed before.
I fucking LOVED it LOL!!! What a nasty bitch!!!
Where can I find one like her? ROFLMAO great story 5 stars.
many strange things happen on NYE. Alcohol reduces inhibition and often people give in to repressed desires.
And a very HOT!!! story. Thanks for sharing. You are nasty!!!!!!!
The title says it all. Not necessarily my cup of tea but I appreciated the quality writing and original fairly realistic story details. Reminds me of some pass-out drunk level co-ed camping and basement sleepovers from my own past. 5/5!
Liked the anal bit and nice touch with her squating and dispossiting the cum in the friends hand though if she could of i would of had her squat and disposit it straight into her mouth.
I don't think I've ever bothered with giving a comment. This was outstanding and I just can't hold back! The protagonist had a really cool sense of humor that just oozes sensuality! Too hot. Thank you for this one. Please write more often.