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Click here"Girl, you are fucking awesome," she said to herself, turning on her heel and walking down the hall.
It was a strange, strange morning, she thought as she walked out onto the gravel of the yard. She let the feel of the lines around her wash away her worries. All magic users had affinity fields, and this was hers. Heat, clockwork and forged metals, the smell of oil and hot iron, all of these things revitalized her. They made her feel at home even when she was so very far away. Standing on a single line, she could feel all of the interconnected miles of the railway, stretching out across the continent, like a single, massive collection of nerves.
She tried to push the mornings distractions out of her mind as made her way to the Bella, her little girl, sitting fat and happy on her own little platform away from the indignant hustle and bustle of the commuters. She tried not to be bothered by that weird face on the platform. She made herself ignore Bennett's strange, aggressive behavior and that parting wink. She forced herself not to fix, in her mind, Cartwright's misquote of the old rail runner's proverb.
Long arms on the Western rails end at the wrist.
Pram rubbed the spot below the band of her father's watch and tried not to think about how weird the morning had been.
The world-in-creation looks very promising and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the tale. Your writing skills are evident! Thanks for writing!
No, I plan on finishing this, though i usually run around two to four weeks per chapter, depending on the length of the chapter itself.
Chapter two is currently pending approval, so expect that soon!
Thanks for reading!
-AMJ
Good day, literary agent, I must say I am pleased beyond compare to see steampunk being brought to this site, it is seriously needed. My main hope is that writing this novel will be full steam ahead, and not break down before the journey is finished like so many steam powered literary agents have done in the past leaving one stranded in a land unfinished.
In other words love it, well written can't wait for more and I hope to god you finish the story LOL X
Thanks for the positive feedback folks!
I'm finishing up chapter two right now, and I am also editing a novel I've already finished in anticipation of dropping it on this site.
Much Love,
-AMJ