All Comments on 'Steamed'

by magicstranger

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BreakerhymenBreakerhymenover 1 year ago

Wonderful story. Do you have any thoughts about making this fantasy reality?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Extremely hot…Especially liked her growing irritation with him for saying no…Would so love to watch my wife preferably after we argued about something…then to watch her climax repeatedly…and I obediently clean everyone up..hot sex after arguing is the best..

plusepluseover 1 year ago

Excellent! Very believable build-up, amazingly erotic, highly arousing and well-written.

I love it!

Please do a sequel or another story, as erotic as this one!

lori791lori791over 1 year ago

liked it a lot,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a wanker the husband was.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story... Yes the ending was a bit abrupt, but the story had a sense of realism.Hot!

Jb0664Jb0664about 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story. Got me hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Written for sluts and their weak and demented little cucks. Awful

IJS0904IJS0904over 3 years ago

Wow! This is a great piece of writing. I love the way they just flowed into the situation. One thing, leading to another, until... Please write again.

WBCO6250WBCO6250over 3 years ago

Very Hot! Excellent read. Thank you. I was hoping it would continue, but it was very satisfying. Great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is a superb story, beautifully told and very arousing! Please write more....

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 3 years ago

A very uncomplicated read and believable also. I thought the ending was too abrupt however it did not stop me from liking it and wanting more, please?

breedinglovebreedingloveover 3 years ago
We loved it!

Very erotic and well written!

hunghandsumhunghandsumalmost 4 years ago
pt 2

This deserves follow up chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
not too bad

I liked the bit where shes mouthing "help me"

Very hot scenario that could of easily been a true story and for me thats what i look for..

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Vomiting all over. Keep writing on toilet walls.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sensational

Too short,but how it occured was conpletely believable..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Write some more!

That was pretty hot. You should continue.

Htiek721Htiek721over 7 years ago
Great writing

This has to be one of the better stories I've seen in a while

mywife4othermenmywife4othermenover 8 years ago
Hot!

Very erotic, arousing and well-written.

More please!

xaviernjxaviernjover 10 years ago
loved it

this was such a turn on. i like the premise and want to see more like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So she gets for help and her husband says....no?!?

What the fuck kind of loser does that? He's supposed to protect her and instead he allows her to be raped? She needs to divorce his ass and leave him homeless and then when the other homeless guys are fucking him up the ass and he begs the cops to help him, they can just smile and say "No."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WOW !

That was Rape and a Woman wrote this ???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
No Setup

I loved the story. I did not feel that he "set her up", he did however let it happen. Then again, so did she. What was to stop her from leaving on her own?

Please write more!

BaronScrewtapeBaronScrewtapeover 12 years ago
Hopefully...

... she leaves him. Any man who would do this to his wife is not a good man. A husband protects his wife, he does not set her up to be fucked by other men for his amusement.

Hopefully she got everything in the divorce.

Yobo36Yobo36over 12 years ago
Excellent!!!

Beautiful set up. Very erotic. Hubby & "Lana" were pleased. My only question...were you "Lana?"

IrfonIrfonalmost 13 years ago
Yes ??

Liked the way it was written - BUT - I could NOT resist if a woman mouthed to me:- ''Help Me''

I realise he set her up,still it goes against the grain - for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Don't you people know anything?

The category "Loving Wives" is about married women having sex with other men, with or without their husband's approval. Period. This well-written, sensuous story was clearly WITH the husband's approval. They don't need yours. Good job, magic stranger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Story

Rape? What idiot can read this and think it's rape. It is clearly SEDUCTION -- and it was mutually satisfying -- to ALL involved. Great story! Write more.

PS. If a reader did not like this story, why read it? It was obvious what the content was going to be!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nicely written...

...short, descriptive, vividly portrayed, somewhat erotic and believable.

Thanks...

...got any more ideas for good stories?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
well written. very erotic

Excellent short story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Fiction

I liked it for what it is, an erotic piece of fiction. Found it an enjoyable read.

demantoiddemantoidabout 13 years ago
Hot and steamy. Hee! Hee! Hee!

Well written. Great build up. Very hot.

roo2u2roo2u2about 13 years ago
Nice

Nice story - would like to read part 2.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycabout 13 years ago
Sweet and sexy

Thanx for this story. Hope you have more to submit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
not bad

could have been longer after the guys left.

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