All Comments on 'Steamy Car Ride'

It's basically another "riding on someone's lap" story. Nobody was watching, and nobody was flashing. That's kind of the point of "voyeurism" and "exhibitionism", you know? And as long as we're being honest, your story was really brief, really kind of pointless, and really full of typos. The one thing it wasn't was really good. It was NOT really good. It was actually pretty bad.

What was it that made this just so unbelievable? Seemed like you'd just written down a series of daydream ideas. Try again.