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All Comments on 'Steamy First Time'

by Silverhunter409

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redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

she was lying to herself and jordie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
To be continued.

Lindsay and Sarah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
terrible

A waste of the reader's time!

ShadowsucksShadowsucksover 9 years ago
Crap! Crap! Crap!

Nothin'! No plot, meaning, uniqueness---nothing. Utter waste of time; yours for writing it, mine for reading it. One star is more generous than you deserve, my friend.

Erin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Followup?

I hope you follow up on this story with what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Good story until the ending. The ending seemed disconnected from the main story.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
Very good

And very well done, definitely needs a parts II to clear up the ending!

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