All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 04'

Great story, great characters. Now the technicals, a/k/a quibbles, will follow as usual. I know, when inspiration strikes, you just have to blast the story onto the keyboard; but then go back and sort out the technicals. They do matter.

Yet another good chapter in a really excellent story.

Liked the start of the series and stories but with the turn to domination has made me want to stop reading anymore chapters. Only got thru the first couple of paragraphs and couldn't read anymore.

Even though I am male I can relate to Helen's story. Please keep writing this story.

D/s isn't my favorite, but you hooked me early on. Great job developing your story! ~ L

Still love this

this writer is really turning the tables and making it all come togather. so glad for that... loving this now.