All Comments on 'Step-Stories: Yes, Ma'am'

...I only gave this 2 stars because it is far too short to be considered a story, or a chapter of one.

Could have been good if developed further into an actual story!

Hope to see more written by you Shellie.

great story. very erotic and nice twist on a tired story line. must have more!

Not quite sure what you have in mind here. First let me say that neither chapters make any sense or if they're even connected. Secondly there is no development regarding the characters or their prior history together. Not even sure which one is first in order. In the first one she is 32 yrs. old and this one she only 31. Last but not least both submission are to short and I you decide to continue this storyline you should get yourself an editor to fine tune it for you.

they did not fuck

Great story wished it played out longer and carried on with a series

That's some hot teasing exercise. Painted the picture well