All Comments on 'Step This Way, Please'

Proper English girl gets held up at the American Immigration

Desk. It seems she has a lethal weapon in her suitcase. Something about a bunny rabbit that jiggles, and makes funny little noises. Considering the political correctness element, this had better be fantasy. *grins* Wonderful Story!

Great stuff

Such crap.

Obviously the person below this remark has little knack for fun. This is a well-written and fun story. Keep it up!

holy shit. I loved it.. very secretive, and erotic... no names! Left me with some wood! Dont believe that "BS" Complaint. Hes just pissed cause this'll never happen to him! nor does he get any! Just a lonely ole fucker sitting in his underwear looking for a circle jerk!!

Excellant. Very well written with a unique subject matter.

Janie this was a very sexy tale and a change of pace for you – well done! However, as a frequent flier (although not to the USA since 9/11) I have yet to experience a baggage check at the Immigration desk. At departure yes but when entering a country, never! Even in the Middle East this has never happened to me. Again 100% for one of my favourite writers. By the way, I picked up an error in your usually perfect English! If you don’t find it email me.

I never had a fantasy like this before, but i certainly do now. I loved the descriptions of her trepidation, then her eventual giving in. Excellent.

An excellent story and very well written.

and very well written. Great job Janie.

What a wonderful fantasy! You obviously know what happened in that room - you write with considerable expertise. So Hot and the Seal of Good Housekeeping! I think I could imagine "some tall guy" meeting you at the plane in San Francisco. Nice soft accent, smelling of just a hint of soap, gorgeous blue eyes.

Wow! This story left me breathless. Very erotic and the vibrator...inspired use of a sex toy. Excellent!

:)

One word: Hot!

You are an exceptional writer. Ignore the little remark about this story being crap. It is far from it!

ANOTHER MOST EXCELLENT VERY EROTIC STORY. VERY EXCITING

A PLEASURE TO READ.