by brewdude2003
What a wonderfully romantic story. I'm so fond of a "happy ending." Thanks for writing it.
Finally - a story with some honest realism to it !! Much more enjoyable to read than most of the fantasies that are so silly and unrealistic.
This story was so dumb as to be laughable! Trite expressions did little to help focus attention. Get a grip and keep practicing. Maybe you will get it right in the future.