by LittleTommyTudor
Different incest story. There is no emotional chemistry/love anywhere. Father marries woman because he is lonely. Stepmother marries husband for reason unknown. Son - unknown quantity.
I'm going to get up and jerk off after reading this hot fuck story,that is one lucky son
I enjoyed your story, but in your next one, please ad " " when you are writing what people are saying. It will help the story flow better when we understand when they start and end a conversation, and your narrative continues.
All in all, you conveyed your thoughts, and your story was pretty good. I would suggest that you allow somebody else to proofread your stories before you publish any more. Literotica offers to edit them for you if you don't feel comfortable having a friend reading your private thoughts.
Good luck, and please keep writing!
this kid is kind of in a bind-hard sex to turn down, but lots of pitfalls in this relationship-good plot twist to moth-son incest-thanks
Storyline is good. And did not find story hard to follow due to lack of quotation marks. Keep going.
Enjoyed the story very much. Time to work on a sequel, as I'm sure there is more to come.